Tuesday, 10 March 2015
Monday, 23 February 2015
Descriptive writing by Lucas and Rico
In Room 8 we are learning to paint a picture for the reader by using awesome describing words and language features like similes.
The rocket exploded with a gigantic bang and there was a violent burst of orange, red, green and purple shards, like a fireworks display.
By Lucas Chen
There was an incredible, enormous, boom and the rocket exploded like a rainbow crashing into the sun.
By Rico Kava
Friday, 20 February 2015
Friday, 28 November 2014
Friday, 7 November 2014
The Napier Earthquake
We have been learning about natural disasters that have happened in New Zealand. The tragedy that we have profiled is the Napier earthquake. Click on the link to see our presentation.
Kolianita, Tia and Mason.
The Napier Earthquake
Kolianita, Tia and Mason.
The Napier Earthquake
Friday, 31 October 2014
Saturday, 18 October 2014
Writing paragraphs by James Duffy
To Mrs Curry and Mum
My learning was to make a paragraph. To make a paragragraph you will need a topic sentence, a detail and a detail.
Here is my paragraph.
The tsunami flooded japan in the afternoon. People ran away as the tsunami approached. The civilians were panicking as they drove away getting to high ground to be safe. Cars speed away, zig zagging through other cars to get away faster than everyone else. The civilians in the destroyed cities were left with homeless, jobless and scared about how they might survive.
My learning was to make a paragraph. To make a paragragraph you will need a topic sentence, a detail and a detail.
Here is my paragraph.
The tsunami flooded japan in the afternoon. People ran away as the tsunami approached. The civilians were panicking as they drove away getting to high ground to be safe. Cars speed away, zig zagging through other cars to get away faster than everyone else. The civilians in the destroyed cities were left with homeless, jobless and scared about how they might survive.
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