Writing paragraphs by James Duffy

To Mrs Curry and Mum
My learning was to make a paragraph. To make a paragragraph you will need a topic sentence, a detail and a detail.
Here is my paragraph.

The tsunami flooded japan in the afternoon. People ran away as the tsunami approached. The civilians were panicking as they drove away getting to high ground to be safe. Cars speed away, zig zagging through other cars to get away faster than everyone else. The civilians in the destroyed cities were left with homeless, jobless and scared about how they might survive.